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I think they're pretty good, Jesse! A marked improvement over the first time you posted them here for comment. keep it up and tighten up the writing, which comes with time spent with the characters, and I think you'll do all right.
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Very nice! All you need now is enough coverage with AT&T to download it in less than 30 minutes and you'll have something there.
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I'm kinda with Josh on the balloon colors, though I think you should keep the color, but perhaps offset them from the background color a little more. Dave Mckean used to use colored word balloons a lot. One thing he did I would suggest is to use a...
I like the writing and the art quite a bit. And, like Josh pointed out, the fact that it's another square panel may have been a turn-off to the editors. An easy way to get around that and still keep it a panel is to modify everything to fit into a...
Your writing seems fine. What I think your artwork needs is more line definition. All the lines are the same width which makes it look like a coloring book. You have one strip where the bird is talking to himself in the window, and there you seem ...
Nice work. Love the Handle "Bar". You should patent that!
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I don't have any simple answers to this. If there were a set of criteria, we'd all be successful comic strip artists. The key is luck, plain and simple.
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- In between cartoon gigs at the moment. Used to write and draw Cole, a self published comic strip that appeared weekly in several Northeast newspapers. Currently working on co-writing a graphic novela. Unfortunatelly, all of us working on it are quite lazy.
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